tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post3690036249276878677..comments2023-08-27T14:47:46.263+05:30Comments on There And Back Again...: ~Pink Mist~Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comBlogger41125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-66380754961727724982014-08-09T14:18:17.347+05:302014-08-09T14:18:17.347+05:30Its true Hank... its power that not just corrupts ...Its true Hank... its power that not just corrupts a human but also society... if power came with purity wars would not be... thank you!! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-67777751293068044152014-08-09T05:36:34.054+05:302014-08-09T05:36:34.054+05:30One gets to be having feelings of despondence. Wit...One gets to be having feelings of despondence. With lots of destructive power those on the ground just lament over the inaction of those who have the ability to act but did not. Nicely Arushi!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-18119037437250671392014-08-08T16:21:21.348+05:302014-08-08T16:21:21.348+05:30its really sad James!its really sad James!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-43321151682563172152014-08-08T16:20:55.443+05:302014-08-08T16:20:55.443+05:30thank you Cifar!! there is no peace in the world y...thank you Cifar!! there is no peace in the world yet!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-6398336900752016602014-08-08T16:12:02.053+05:302014-08-08T16:12:02.053+05:30thank you Enigma!! i can only imagine the horror a...thank you Enigma!! i can only imagine the horror and write about it!! no one actually knows what they felt that died that day!!I pray for them!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-64103032014973194112014-08-08T16:10:49.927+05:302014-08-08T16:10:49.927+05:30Thank you George!! thats the most tragic of all lo...Thank you George!! thats the most tragic of all losses!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-27987384193706886572014-08-08T12:25:15.328+05:302014-08-08T12:25:15.328+05:30that's a beautiful tribute to the victims of t...that's a beautiful tribute to the victims of the most horrifying incident in human history but the world is still competing for weapons of mass destruction.<br /><br /><a href="http://blogthepoint.blogspot.com/2014/08/luminous-smile.html" rel="nofollow">Luminous Smile</a>Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-89510654006016805002014-08-08T12:17:18.391+05:302014-08-08T12:17:18.391+05:30"I turn to a wisp of flesh and blood,
So litt..."I turn to a wisp of flesh and blood,<br />So little, so less, no more than mud," - This is a haunting image.<br /><br />Talking about the horror from first person's perspective definitely has a greater impact on the reader's mind because one personal experience can counteract many other outsider observation. A powerful and gut-wrenching piece.Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-79115617994055248332014-08-08T08:27:25.512+05:302014-08-08T08:27:25.512+05:30Such devastation that was not needed, you captured...Such devastation that was not needed, you captured it quite brilliantly in a few lines. The loss is always human.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-58351813291301605842014-08-08T08:03:18.143+05:302014-08-08T08:03:18.143+05:30thanks for the explanation. Now I'm sad once ...thanks for the explanation. Now I'm sad once more... :(Nicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-42907908817723895762014-08-08T00:36:53.974+05:302014-08-08T00:36:53.974+05:30Thank you Rose! no problem at all!!Thank you Rose! no problem at all!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-16688775795784610642014-08-07T23:51:53.178+05:302014-08-07T23:51:53.178+05:30My apologies..I think I intended that she didn'...My apologies..I think I intended that she didn't have to suffer for longJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-72111673363390895982014-08-07T23:32:31.701+05:302014-08-07T23:32:31.701+05:30incinerated Rose!!.. they were burnt!incinerated Rose!!.. they were burnt!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-85851210062208195352014-08-07T23:28:06.732+05:302014-08-07T23:28:06.732+05:30What a gripping perspective...in some way I am hap...What a gripping perspective...in some way I am happy her shoes are lifted out the mudJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-32374567837560713772014-08-07T23:14:17.984+05:302014-08-07T23:14:17.984+05:30Thank you Sumana....Thank you Sumana....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-18271839505711876562014-08-07T23:13:37.312+05:302014-08-07T23:13:37.312+05:30Thank you Cosmo for the insight... i love your fee...Thank you Cosmo for the insight... i love your feedback and just realised ure right!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-8834229529060965252014-08-07T16:51:16.278+05:302014-08-07T16:51:16.278+05:30truth is sometimes unbearable..what pain a parent ...truth is sometimes unbearable..what pain a parent 's heart must have suffered that he would pray for his / her child to die...you've brought out the trauma of the aftermath so vividly Arushi and also the untold mute sorrow in the pink mist...a brilliant write...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-56940377620904592342014-08-07T16:14:54.791+05:302014-08-07T16:14:54.791+05:30A thoughtful piece, soberly put.
A side comment:...A thoughtful piece, soberly put. <br />A side comment: I find the bolded underlined words distract me from the flow of the work.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-4171839690145381482014-08-07T14:16:24.545+05:302014-08-07T14:16:24.545+05:30Prayer is all we have to give!Prayer is all we have to give!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-55480720657910364862014-08-07T14:12:16.921+05:302014-08-07T14:12:16.921+05:30true that Ann!! i wish the hatred was so much less...true that Ann!! i wish the hatred was so much less!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-35279405878097126232014-08-07T14:11:50.783+05:302014-08-07T14:11:50.783+05:30not liberation alice.. maybe not! but wouldnt it b...not liberation alice.. maybe not! but wouldnt it be better for the little ones to die in a blast than be killed in a slow poisonous tortured death living half crippled and mutilated by war and explosion!! the times after were too painful i think for children to live in them!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-55431067241840532902014-08-07T14:08:55.155+05:302014-08-07T14:08:55.155+05:30i consider myself blessed to not have lived throug...i consider myself blessed to not have lived through those horrible times!! it must have been hhorrible.. i can only imagine!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-20316666963618604812014-08-07T14:08:01.744+05:302014-08-07T14:08:01.744+05:30James "pink mist" is a phrase commonly u...James "pink mist" is a phrase commonly used for what is left of a human body after its blasted ! its a rather sweet name for a gruesome vision! thank yoU!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-2058743245546744312014-08-07T14:06:34.119+05:302014-08-07T14:06:34.119+05:30i think Kate... if it were not for Hiroshima or Na...i think Kate... if it were not for Hiroshima or Nagasaki we would have had a a-bomb somewhere else... it was only history lessons that have put any control on powerhungry people and country. so maybe the truth does need to be relayed afterall... how else are we to learn who wernt there to see the horridness!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-35580977699301763602014-08-07T14:01:58.842+05:302014-08-07T14:01:58.842+05:30i loved the thought of merciful nature... the thou...i loved the thought of merciful nature... the thought of a flower growing amidst such devastation Sherry!! i read a lot of sad poems on this prompt! yours was refreshing and full of hope... i read one of the poems that described the plight of a soldier who was in the war... the sleepless nights he spends... i dont think that was very inaccurate!! i think it was Marco's poem for the same prompt! not sure though!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.com