tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post4260425296674117274..comments2023-08-27T14:47:46.263+05:30Comments on There And Back Again...: Disheartened!Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-28145343658932403892014-08-12T12:13:56.206+05:302014-08-12T12:13:56.206+05:30Thank you Jim.. you really inspired me... i dont t...Thank you Jim.. you really inspired me... i dont think that i started to write anything dark but since you suggested out of the box i gave it a shot ... :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-5602264621428569632014-08-12T12:12:37.679+05:302014-08-12T12:12:37.679+05:30Yes... i think the cover up of money can makpeople...Yes... i think the cover up of money can makpeople seem happy when they are really NoT..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-44619490247608010292014-08-12T05:59:58.394+05:302014-08-12T05:59:58.394+05:30It came out really nice, Arushi. It had to end, y...It came out really nice, Arushi. It had to end, you did it up good, like a soap opera ridding itself of a used up character. Thanks for the mention, I do think you got out of the box here really fine.<br />I think we all ought to be able to write dark poetry, just don't let it get hold of you or make it habit forming. <br />..<br />So unsatisfied with herself<br />Not happy with what she had thought <br />Thought it would be their perfect love<br />Disheartened, mired, one way out<br /><br />das ende, schluss<br />..<br />Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-31592232626460320742014-08-12T05:25:37.367+05:302014-08-12T05:25:37.367+05:30She seemed doomed from the start. Makes me wonder...She seemed doomed from the start. Makes me wonder how much control you had of this poor character! Joking. But realistically, sometimes we have no choice and don't even know someone's in trouble until she's gone.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-19289257638974483232014-08-11T20:25:38.433+05:302014-08-11T20:25:38.433+05:30If only she 'd realise that... but she seems n...If only she 'd realise that... but she seems naive maybe even trapped to me....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-13450164102040941042014-08-11T20:22:17.318+05:302014-08-11T20:22:17.318+05:30Oh no, not the loop! Hoping she awakes from her mo...Oh no, not the loop! Hoping she awakes from her moment and is reborn with all the life about her! She, with tender heart has far too much to offer.21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-24315198022244170952014-08-11T20:14:31.909+05:302014-08-11T20:14:31.909+05:30Thank you Jo Hannah. ..Thank you Jo Hannah. ..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-41704544421859327352014-08-11T20:14:12.026+05:302014-08-11T20:14:12.026+05:30Probably magalay.... i think thats all that fit......Probably magalay.... i think thats all that fit...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-30603271125636341952014-08-11T20:13:42.855+05:302014-08-11T20:13:42.855+05:30Thank you Bjorn...Thank you Bjorn...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-65876659324510877992014-08-11T19:54:17.589+05:302014-08-11T19:54:17.589+05:30Well, that was a great success! the communal poem ...Well, that was a great success! the communal poem growing into this wonderfully competent sonnet.avalonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051456576217305095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-77720524389460824942014-08-11T17:55:11.916+05:302014-08-11T17:55:11.916+05:30I think the darkness was inevitable for this one. ...I think the darkness was inevitable for this one. There was such an air of violence, after this lines: "Loving him for it was easy to love /Than to hate such ghastly, soulless monster!" As if only an extreme would fix/end/ease the hurt. <br /><br />It causes my mind to gaze at stormy echoes of "Porphyria's Lover", by the way...Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-52818535313120881272014-08-11T16:52:53.276+05:302014-08-11T16:52:53.276+05:30Such darkness -- still so nicely packaged.. the re...Such darkness -- still so nicely packaged.. the repetitions worked so well to increase the sadnessbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-40029019818364066802014-08-11T14:23:09.455+05:302014-08-11T14:23:09.455+05:30Thank you Vnadana! i'm gratified! :)Thank you Vnadana! i'm gratified! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-77526643343282609842014-08-11T14:19:10.816+05:302014-08-11T14:19:10.816+05:30it is awesome and one of my favourites now!it is awesome and one of my favourites now!Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-34960429424269706112014-08-11T14:16:27.462+05:302014-08-11T14:16:27.462+05:30Thank you... Thank you... Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-17590428458077588942014-08-11T14:02:26.434+05:302014-08-11T14:02:26.434+05:30Oh so sad and yes dark. But I quite like dark poet...Oh so sad and yes dark. But I quite like dark poetry for some reason.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11496129504787572149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-33540442558442124372014-08-11T13:31:26.031+05:302014-08-11T13:31:26.031+05:30it is isnt it!! yet i couldn't do any happier....it is isnt it!! yet i couldn't do any happier... i wasn't in a great mood that day i think!! :/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-68687063055384295872014-08-11T13:18:53.959+05:302014-08-11T13:18:53.959+05:30It is certainly dark. Can only hope for the best!...It is certainly dark. Can only hope for the best!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.com