tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post473525311952336112..comments2023-08-27T14:47:46.263+05:30Comments on There And Back Again...: Broken BrainsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comBlogger38125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-88225557122679148342014-07-16T13:00:50.986+05:302014-07-16T13:00:50.986+05:30Haannah the image was a prompt from MindLoveMisery...Haannah the image was a prompt from MindLoveMisery!!! Thanks...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-44078231715703919842014-07-16T13:00:07.820+05:302014-07-16T13:00:07.820+05:30Thank you Grace...Thank you Grace...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-63679360640006759402014-07-16T12:59:31.562+05:302014-07-16T12:59:31.562+05:30Thank you...Thank you...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-18789242102202611462014-07-16T07:45:29.570+05:302014-07-16T07:45:29.570+05:30For us, me, I....love that and the image you picke...For us, me, I....love that and the image you picked to muse from...such a sharp point made the shape is befitting. Well done!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-19187028137734369422014-07-16T03:27:22.597+05:302014-07-16T03:27:22.597+05:30I too love the concrete form and shape and that en...I too love the concrete form and shape and that ending I - so well done ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-701913502083434962014-07-15T18:37:18.023+05:302014-07-15T18:37:18.023+05:30The poem is as penetrating as the pointed shape su...The poem is as penetrating as the pointed shape suggest, yet also whimsical and serious at once. I know how much work it takes to make one of these--very effective and well-crafted piece.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-89230466071824819092014-07-15T18:08:06.405+05:302014-07-15T18:08:06.405+05:30Yes george a universe revolves around 'me'...Yes george a universe revolves around 'me' . Thank you..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-21701490299624456262014-07-15T16:41:02.767+05:302014-07-15T16:41:02.767+05:30It all comes down to that finite point... me. Ext...It all comes down to that finite point... me. Extremely effective way to write this!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-12543309940911766612014-07-15T13:34:07.114+05:302014-07-15T13:34:07.114+05:30Thank you kerry...Thank you kerry...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-66946116192446432642014-07-15T13:32:56.624+05:302014-07-15T13:32:56.624+05:30Excellent concrete poetry, Arushi. Your skill is s...Excellent concrete poetry, Arushi. Your skill is shown in maintaining both shape and rhymes throughout.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-7050537438514296362014-07-15T13:28:31.557+05:302014-07-15T13:28:31.557+05:30Thank you hank!!!Thank you hank!!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-7459575600124907982014-07-15T13:26:27.356+05:302014-07-15T13:26:27.356+05:30Very innovative way of doing it Arushi! The visual...Very innovative way of doing it Arushi! The visual and the rhyming are outstandingly done despite the tightness. Brilliant!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-84989652344566961512014-07-15T11:03:56.389+05:302014-07-15T11:03:56.389+05:30Yes magaly you did comment but thank you again...Yes magaly you did comment but thank you again...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-26862554776633993282014-07-15T11:00:49.089+05:302014-07-15T11:00:49.089+05:30Thank you mark...Thank you mark...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-12359349468536409112014-07-15T11:00:02.473+05:302014-07-15T11:00:02.473+05:30Thank you kathryn..Thank you kathryn..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-81159827076543808882014-07-15T10:57:21.101+05:302014-07-15T10:57:21.101+05:30Magaly thank you for atopping by...Magaly thank you for atopping by...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-10552490587808662312014-07-15T10:56:49.485+05:302014-07-15T10:56:49.485+05:30Thank you susie... I tried really hard
.Thank you susie... I tried really hard<br />.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-71137222373323370492014-07-15T10:56:23.166+05:302014-07-15T10:56:23.166+05:30Thank you marco... m glad you enjoyed this..Thank you marco... m glad you enjoyed this..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-88791711511929793342014-07-15T10:55:33.828+05:302014-07-15T10:55:33.828+05:30Blue... the hearts sings.... thank you... it was n...Blue... the hearts sings.... thank you... it was not so much as exercise... it was quite simple...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-21906121078399422902014-07-15T10:51:26.020+05:302014-07-15T10:51:26.020+05:30Thank you Sreeja...Thank you Sreeja...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-83520993420058715852014-07-15T10:50:55.830+05:302014-07-15T10:50:55.830+05:30Thank you V...Thank you V...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-66620587439259095552014-07-15T08:12:36.601+05:302014-07-15T08:12:36.601+05:30I'm having a very strange moment right now. I ...I'm having a very strange moment right now. I was sure I commented on this poem. Maybe I was dreaming. Hm...<br /><br />"...hushed huge pain<br />shattered sad hearts"<br /><br />These lines make feel all kinds of deep things. I'm now thinking of a heart that speaks in <i>shatters</i>.Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-24779899207216086042014-07-15T00:02:36.930+05:302014-07-15T00:02:36.930+05:30Love the way your poem drains down to and at the s...Love the way your poem drains down to and at the same time totters on that tiny supporting "I".Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-28289798296139522772014-07-14T21:25:16.504+05:302014-07-14T21:25:16.504+05:30The shape and rhyme work so well together in this ...The shape and rhyme work so well together in this piece. Great write.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-76001625623754325202014-07-14T18:53:34.110+05:302014-07-14T18:53:34.110+05:30"...hushed huge pain
shattered sad hearts&quo..."...hushed huge pain<br />shattered sad hearts"<br /><br />Such painful silence... <br /><br />Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.com