tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post4824390478755957102..comments2023-08-27T14:47:46.263+05:30Comments on There And Back Again...: The Climb...Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-52143409609799607962014-07-10T17:29:11.015+05:302014-07-10T17:29:11.015+05:30Thanx again HA.... Thanx again HA.... Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-38649663013533640542014-07-10T12:41:35.158+05:302014-07-10T12:41:35.158+05:30Hello Arushi,
Thanks for taking it positively.
I ...Hello Arushi,<br /><br />Thanks for taking it positively.<br />I read Jane Reichhold's tips again. She writes three things about rhymes in haiku:<br />1. Avoid rhymes.<br />2. Use rhyming words at the end of first and third lines.<br />3. Use rhymes elsewhere.<br /><br />Thus, I think that it is a matter of flexibility, of how one wants to go for it. I thought of sharing that with you. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-24208669604938183012014-07-10T04:45:51.579+05:302014-07-10T04:45:51.579+05:30These are gorgeous -- I liked them very much. These are gorgeous -- I liked them very much. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-36882416653535626102014-07-09T19:40:09.545+05:302014-07-09T19:40:09.545+05:30Thank you HA for the feedback... The rhyme was qui...Thank you HA for the feedback... The rhyme was quite unintentional it seems... coz for some reason i dint even notice it... maybe ill try again... thanx again!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-70989359979567909212014-07-09T16:33:04.362+05:302014-07-09T16:33:04.362+05:30Well done. The first haiku is a feast of imagery a...Well done. The first haiku is a feast of imagery and the break in the second one is aptly done. Great job.<br />The only thing that can be modified is the rhyme in the second haiku, top and slope, because haiku is an un-rhymed short poem.<br />Otherwise, you did it all right. :-)<br />-HAAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com