tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post744989095637357760..comments2023-08-27T14:47:46.263+05:30Comments on There And Back Again...: The Traitor!Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-89114681843815806632014-06-19T10:58:35.914+05:302014-06-19T10:58:35.914+05:30a traitor, indeed. our world is filled with them, ...a traitor, indeed. our world is filled with them, it seems ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-17636915210549078602014-06-17T23:21:48.032+05:302014-06-17T23:21:48.032+05:30Wow! this one is brilliant...and with the Indian f...Wow! this one is brilliant...and with the Indian flag it gives more feelingThomas Oliverahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07216327793398994427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-74299133297092771652014-06-17T16:07:39.547+05:302014-06-17T16:07:39.547+05:30true that ... exactly what kerry said also... !!true that ... exactly what kerry said also... !!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-18766261092223256472014-06-17T16:06:45.080+05:302014-06-17T16:06:45.080+05:30thank u kerry... this is indeed something that hap...thank u kerry... this is indeed something that happens even now... the modern politicians betray there country without much thought every now and then in a more subtle and sometimes even legal manner...<br /><br />btw i removed the widget !! thanx for the insight!! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-19937390180702394452014-06-17T16:03:16.862+05:302014-06-17T16:03:16.862+05:30thank u :)thank u :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-49509858253723041102014-06-16T20:02:27.140+05:302014-06-16T20:02:27.140+05:30An epic approach to this.. to go with a dark subje...An epic approach to this.. to go with a dark subject like this and write about traitors is a alas a modern as well as a classic topicbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-23802208186872903252014-06-16T12:53:15.637+05:302014-06-16T12:53:15.637+05:30I find it difficult to type a response here becaus...I find it difficult to type a response here because this widget obscures the comment box, but I will try.<br /><br />You have chosen a very expansive subject for your poem and one which needs to be explored in the modern day, even as you suggest its place in a long history of betrayals. Your poem has a classic feel, and I am impressed that you went to three stanzas. I am interested to see that you chose to write in rhyming couplets. I read that Yeats modified the octave to suit his own purposes and your choice worked very well for you.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-73724638540569281842014-06-16T10:28:51.645+05:302014-06-16T10:28:51.645+05:30it reads like a ballad...nicely done Arushi..it reads like a ballad...nicely done Arushi..Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-31424932672878024952014-06-16T02:54:05.160+05:302014-06-16T02:54:05.160+05:30yes there is no bigger betrayal!! yes there is no bigger betrayal!! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8495919712365506382.post-70760644847178146682014-06-16T02:18:01.566+05:302014-06-16T02:18:01.566+05:30I like the majestic voice of the country's his...I like the majestic voice of the country's history ~ What a cost to the country, including the traitor's flight ~ Thanks for sharing ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com