This poem Is- I, Love, You!

"Arushi Ahuja"
Me+Hubby


This poem is  I!
This poem is Love!
This poem is You!

I am a bird free falling from the sky,
I am a spirit felt in a heartbeat's sigh,
I am a love song written by every poet,
I am the will to live free forever alive!
This poem is I!

Love is a feeling of falling through emptiness,
Love is warm, consoling maybe treacherous, 
Love lives in the heart of every living soul,
Love is here forever, Gods very own!
This poem is Love!

You are mine forever and ever after,
You are in my heart, soul, joy and laughter,
You live to be a Someone in this incomplete world,
But you are my Only One, completion, amour!
This poem is You!

This poem is a passionate free bird I!
This poem is the forbidden fruit Love!
This poem is adorable you!



Thank you Hannah for the wonderful form at Imaginary Garden With Real Toads!

the imaginary garden with real toads


18 comments:

  1. All about love, a 'feel good' bit of poetry.

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  2. A very nice and pleasant poem, Arushi. It makes me smile when I read it. No, it is no a funny poem but a pleasant, pleasing one to read, that makes me smile.
    I am a love song written by every poet,
    You are in my heart, soul, joy and laughter,
    Love is warm, consoling maybe treacherous
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    1. thank you Jim... was really pissed at Mr. Husband when i wrote this... was just trying to remind myself of love!! kinda worked!!

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  3. How sweet, passionate and adorable ~ Love is my fav theme to write about ~

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    1. Thank you Grace... I am glad you enjoyed this...

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  4. You brought this to life with such grace and stuck to the form SO well...I love how different these poems can read even when they hold the same creative structure. The line that especially made me sigh in response was this, "I am a spirit felt in a heartbeat's sigh," I just LOVE the idea of a heartbeat's sigh! Brilliant and thank you so much for taking on the challenge so well! :)

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    1. thank you hannah!! i really enjoyed the challenge myself!! :)

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  5. The themes you decided on are clever and sincere. Love the sentimental hue of this.

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  6. I like how you've expressed the feel and the endlessness of love in this form...

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  7. Very well done. That was very clever to split up the I love you and describe each part so well.

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  8. This poem is......beautiful!

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So much time I spent writing this... Leave me here the words on your lips!!