Reading In Time!

"Unknown"
Taken in Lampur!

She 
reads
about butterflies,
up and down
as they go far beyond,
across another realm of hearty imaginations and defies
all natural laws of Lepidopteras in faraway heavens- 
and she reads as time
ticktocks, slowly unnoticed,
holding on
to 
Hope!

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I combined the Fib-onacci Challenge by hedgewitch
&
for which I used my poem Lepidopteras!

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24 comments:

  1. brudbergAugust 24, 2014 at 2:05 AM

    Intriguing.. the fib works very well here..

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  2. humbirdAugust 24, 2014 at 2:17 AM

    So creative and magical use of see -saw from your another poem, really 'book in a book in a book' with fib- twist :) ~ Love it!

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  3. SusanAugust 24, 2014 at 3:32 AM

    I think she wants to fly away just like before. I wonder if they ever took her along in between. At any rate--in or out of time--they are still a saving grace. (They defy/defies?)

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  4. Sumana RoyAugust 24, 2014 at 9:05 AM

    an excellent combination...love her dream of that flight to the realm of hearty imagination...

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  5. Vandana SharmaAugust 24, 2014 at 9:43 AM

    amazingly done!!

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  6. MargaretAugust 24, 2014 at 10:35 AM

    Books, imagination, flight. - I often lose time while I read. :)

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  7. kaykualaAugust 24, 2014 at 4:22 PM

    That's amazing Arushi! You managed to bring all three in play at one sitting! Great Fibonacci!

    Hank

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  8. GraceAugust 24, 2014 at 6:55 PM

    I like that ending, holding on to hope ~

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  9. BodhiroseAugust 25, 2014 at 2:20 AM

    I love "another realm of hearty imaginations"...excellent...so enjoyed this.

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  10. Susie ClevengerAugust 25, 2014 at 3:03 AM

    Wow! Couldn't be a better place to be...beautful

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  11. JimAugust 25, 2014 at 6:08 AM

    She reads and waits. Nice poem with that as a base, Arushi.
    You did good with the Fib-onacci form. This is a nice, sensitive poem.
    ..

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    1. UnknownAugust 25, 2014 at 11:11 PM

      thank you Jim! its been a long time i havent heard from you! :) pleasure to have you back!!

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  12. Kerry O'ConnorAugust 25, 2014 at 11:27 PM

    The shape of your fibonacci seems to have wings and the words themselves soar.

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So much time I spent writing this... Leave me here the words on your lips!!

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