The Shortcut Path!

"Arushi Ahuja"
Shimla.

Hopping over the fence
In a hurry to meet her friends-
Her frock torn by the barbs!

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Taking the shortcut path
Over a wall, climbing a tree-
Romeo meets Juliet!

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Written for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai!

18 comments:

  1. Lovely ones Arushi! Urgency and romance...

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  2. I read that short cuts can cause pain...
    Nice angle on these Arushi

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    1. Thank you Moonie... shortcuts are always more tough..

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  3. Whew! That shortcut over the wall and tree sounds daunting!

    Shortcut

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  4. Loved your nod to Romeo and Juliet --
    Both are fantastic :)

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  5. Filled with real life paths ~ lovely haiku ~ thanks, ^_^

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  6. No matter what happens, love conquers all!!!

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  7. Aha! The carefree antics of the youngsters! Nicely Arushi!

    Hank

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  8. Awesome haiku Arushi ... the one about Romeo and Julliet is a gem.

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  9. When I was visiting in California some of the fences where high cinder block.
    I was lucky I bought a local map because at some points I had to back track - there wasn't any short cut!

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    1. When we most want Jules we cant find them... id love to visit California...

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