~Dark~

"Arushi Ahuja"

Chopping woods,
In a world growing dark-
Just as coal!

Written for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai!

14 comments:

  1. The darkness can be driven away.. but the blackness of the coal will linger like scar-tissue..

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  2. nice play on words in your haiku ~ lovely header for your blog ~ love it

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  3. I hate to think what the world would be like without trees...

    Sort of Like Chopping Wood

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  4. ha. nice word play on the last line.
    did you change your lay out....

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    1. yes Brian!! i got bored of my last one... i'm glad you noticed! :)

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  5. I hate to think that the world really is growing dark...

    Morning by morning

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  6. Some say we are all tools -
    Are humans 'cutting edge' tools?

    Lovely to sit by a fire that we have worked for - or with a friend who lights our fire :)

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    1. Possible Jules... and yet a burning tree leaves a sad thought if you look.

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So much time I spent writing this... Leave me here the words on your lips!!