The Drink...

"Arushi Ahuja"

Her Cathartic expression of love put him in a risk,
   Wherein drinking too much might jeopardise,
What he thought was not a relationship!


The "I love you" resounded twice in his head,
He stared at her, at his glass then he just simply left
Walking away, emotionless lost in his glorious daze!

Written for 3WW.


20 comments:

  1. What a shame! So near yet so far is all in the process of growing up. Wonderful write Arushi!

    Hank

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    1. hank .. people have become distant and materialistic these days!! thank u!!

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    1. i dont think he really cared... much woe for the girl though....

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  3. A glorious daze isn't a bad way to leave off...not really..nicely captured!

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  4. not a great response to her I love you he may not be able to come back to her.

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    1. I really dont think he intends to Sheilagh!!

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  5. He thinks any response except walking away is commitment; what a fool he is. He is clearly immature and new to the game! I would be glued to the seat.

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    1. yah!! well its not often a beautiful girl proposes!!

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  6. The coward's way out! Why not just stay and tell her he's not ready for a relationship.

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    1. maybe scared or maybe just too arrogant!!

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  7. ...because he needs to learn the responsibilities. ~ well written.

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  8. He does not love her ...so what?She is still having a good time being in love and he can stroke his heart of stone.

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  9. Maybe he left in a daze because he was overcome with joy and momentarily didn't know what to say or do, I'd rather think that than just believe he's a jerk. Well written!

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    1. thank u belva... youre so positive!! ;)

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