The Drink...

"Unknown"

Her Cathartic expression of love put him in a risk,
   Wherein drinking too much might jeopardise,
What he thought was not a relationship!


The "I love you" resounded twice in his head,
He stared at her, at his glass then he just simply left
Walking away, emotionless lost in his glorious daze!

Written for 3WW.


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20 comments:

  1. kaykualaJune 25, 2014 at 6:55 PM

    What a shame! So near yet so far is all in the process of growing up. Wonderful write Arushi!

    Hank

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    1. UnknownJune 25, 2014 at 11:10 PM

      hank .. people have become distant and materialistic these days!! thank u!!

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherJune 25, 2014 at 7:48 PM

    Left with himself...how sad!

    Cathartic Buttercups

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    1. UnknownJune 25, 2014 at 11:11 PM

      i dont think he really cared... much woe for the girl though....

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  3. Jae RoseJune 25, 2014 at 7:56 PM

    A glorious daze isn't a bad way to leave off...not really..nicely captured!

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  4. Sheilagh LeeJune 25, 2014 at 9:39 PM

    not a great response to her I love you he may not be able to come back to her.

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    1. UnknownJune 25, 2014 at 11:12 PM

      I really dont think he intends to Sheilagh!!

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  5. Alice AudreyJune 26, 2014 at 12:06 AM

    He's going to regret that.

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  6. Old EggJune 26, 2014 at 4:12 AM

    He thinks any response except walking away is commitment; what a fool he is. He is clearly immature and new to the game! I would be glued to the seat.

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    1. UnknownJuly 3, 2014 at 10:46 PM

      yah!! well its not often a beautiful girl proposes!!

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  7. RNSANEJune 26, 2014 at 9:06 AM

    The coward's way out! Why not just stay and tell her he's not ready for a relationship.

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  8. humbirdJune 26, 2014 at 9:36 PM

    ...because he needs to learn the responsibilities. ~ well written.

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  9. rallentandaJune 27, 2014 at 9:30 PM

    He does not love her ...so what?She is still having a good time being in love and he can stroke his heart of stone.

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  10. Belva Rae StaplesJuly 2, 2014 at 6:54 PM

    Maybe he left in a daze because he was overcome with joy and momentarily didn't know what to say or do, I'd rather think that than just believe he's a jerk. Well written!

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