Emerald!

"Unknown"
Mask Party at Goa!
Emerald blue butterfly,
       growing from an ugly past
                  into opulent lust...

 My second attempt at a Haiku on Butterflies for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai!






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13 comments:

  1. Vandana SharmaJune 24, 2014 at 12:55 PM

    Such a deep meaning and lesson in ti. Though our past might have seen failures but the future and present can be made good if we donot let the past burden us.

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  2. UnknownJune 24, 2014 at 3:34 PM

    but most of the time V we do let our past hinder our future... so sad!!

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  3. PirateGunnJune 24, 2014 at 4:56 PM

    THAT is really a wonderful haiku, so deep, so strong. A great haku is such a pleasure to read and ponder upon.

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherJune 24, 2014 at 7:08 PM

    That last line glows!

    Butterfly Seeking Nectar

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  5. UnknownJune 24, 2014 at 8:16 PM

    Yes I think we could learn from the butterfly (past and present)

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    1. UnknownJune 24, 2014 at 11:55 PM

      so much to learn from nature always moonie!!

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  6. ChèvrefeuilleJune 25, 2014 at 12:49 AM

    Awesome Arushi ... this is a very nice haiku as I may say so ...you are a quick learner ... this is really a nicely composed haiku that last line is spectecular.

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    1. UnknownJune 25, 2014 at 12:57 AM

      thank you ... kristjaan!! plz keep coming up with lots and lots of more kigo... thanx for stopping by!!

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  7. AnonymousJune 25, 2014 at 12:35 PM

    A beautiful haiku that has so much meaning about transformation...lovely!

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    1. UnknownJune 25, 2014 at 4:27 PM

      Thank you robert... I tried the second time...

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  8. brudbergJune 26, 2014 at 2:22 AM

    Opulent lust.. oh la la..

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