~Dark~

"Unknown"

Chopping woods,
In a world growing dark-
Just as coal!

Written for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai!
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14 comments:

  1. brudbergAugust 5, 2014 at 1:42 AM

    The darkness can be driven away.. but the blackness of the coal will linger like scar-tissue..

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  2. carol l mckennaAugust 5, 2014 at 3:14 AM

    nice play on words in your haiku ~ lovely header for your blog ~ love it

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherAugust 5, 2014 at 3:28 AM

    I hate to think what the world would be like without trees...

    Sort of Like Chopping Wood

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  4. Brian MillerAugust 5, 2014 at 3:33 AM

    ha. nice word play on the last line.
    did you change your lay out....

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    1. UnknownAugust 5, 2014 at 1:58 PM

      yes Brian!! i got bored of my last one... i'm glad you noticed! :)

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  5. MarkAugust 6, 2014 at 12:07 AM

    I hate to think that the world really is growing dark...

    Morning by morning

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  6. JulesAugust 7, 2014 at 3:31 AM

    Some say we are all tools -
    Are humans 'cutting edge' tools?

    Lovely to sit by a fire that we have worked for - or with a friend who lights our fire :)

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    1. UnknownAugust 7, 2014 at 6:42 PM

      Possible Jules... and yet a burning tree leaves a sad thought if you look.

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  7. ChèvrefeuilleAugust 11, 2014 at 5:45 PM

    Beautifully composed Arushi

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